Self Published Books are Dreck. (Really? All Of Them?)

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I can’t turn anywhere these days without someone claiming that self published books are all horrid. Writers forums, communities, large news sites, blogs – everyone has an opinion and most of it isn’t good.

It’s as if it’s become accepted that if you self publish, you aren’t good enough for a traditional publisher. Not a real writer.

(By the way – I use the term ‘self’ published lightly since not many of us do everything ourselves, often we hire people to do covers, editing, formatting and so on. Indie publishing is a much better term (and the one I personally prefer), but I’ll continue using self during this article since that’s what most media are using).

It’s not just media and angry bloggers that sneer at self pubbers though, even self published authors view other self published authors with derision, and feel it’s their duty to point out their crimes to the world.

  • “She can’t write, look at where she put a comma”,
  • “My god – did you see that she wrote an action tag where it wasn’t needed”,
  • “Too formulaic”,
  • “The cover looks like my dog did it”,
  • “I’m going to do it the right way and ask for fifty thousand dollars on a Kickstarter project so I can pay someone an exorbitant fee and feel better about myself”,
  • “I had a New York Editor tell me I have talent so I’m better than you”.

Sigh.

Being a writer is hard enough, but when your fellow authors can’t support you, you better have a good outside support system to get you through that kind of criticism otherwise you’ll give up (writers can take a bad review to the extreme which may or may not include vodka, donkey’s and loaded water pistols. Not that I would know. *cough*).

Look, I’m not naive enough to believe that every book that is uploaded to Amazon is good. Any monkey can spend a bit of time at the keyboard and crank out words if they put enough hours into it. Just like anyone can put up a website with dubious ‘articles’ and slap some Adsense on it. Not that I would know that either *cough cough* (pops some cough lozenges).

But just as the bad websites fade into obscurity, so do the bad books.

Readers are not stupid. They can decide what they like and do not like.
(And remember what one person likes another doesn’t.)

Readers decide what is good and what they will pay money for (and if they don’t – they get a refund and avoid that author in the future).

My only job is to make sure I write something good and entertaining (fiction) or good and informative (non fiction), and get it in front of readers who’ll like it. Which isn’t always as simple as it sounds…

How to write GOOD self published books (that won’t make someone stab their eyes out).

Writers get better two ways – by reading (a lot) and by writing (a lot).

But there are ways to fast-track your skills so the (a lot) part doesn’t take as long, which I’m about to talk about.

Many authors today are too busy obsessing over the ‘marketing’ side of publishing, that I feel they sometimes forget to work on the ‘craft’ side.

Improving the craft side, and learning to write better stories, will make you far more ‘marketable’ than spending your time ‘marketing’.

The first way is to study.

Study bestselling novels and see what they are doing – How do they write cliffhangers? How do they develop characters?

Or you could take craft workshops and read craft books. I’m currently on my third workshop for the year, and let’s not get started on the amount of craft books I’m amassing.

Focused practice.

You remember the old ‘rule’ that you needed 10,000 hours to learn something? Well turns out – that is only for those wanting to be an expert. Who has the time to be an expert?

In reality it only takes about 20 hours of focused practice to get good at something.

That’s a little under a month of focused practice, and you can become a better writer than you are now, and write better books. Yay.

What do you mean by focused practice?

If you break down a task – let’s say writing a novel – you’ll see that it’s made up of a million different writer ‘tricks’.

  • good hook openings to draw the reader in.
  • well-developed characters.
  • realistic and interesting dialogue.
  • exciting cliffhangers.
  • genre specific ‘must do’s’ e.g. romance needs a hot guy and a strong female lead (generally).
  • rising and falling tension.
  • sensory detail.
  • plotting that’s fresh (but also fits certain rules such as three act structure ).
  • satisfying closings, and so on.

You can choose one and practice that. For 20 hours (or thereabouts).

Let’s say you want to write good hook openings to your stories, and you want to spend the next month “practicing” to get better at it.

You already know that a good opening must have a character in a setting with a problem (from the seven point plot outline).

  1. Start by reading a few books in your genre that you thought did a good job at drawing you in. Notice what the author did. Was it first person, third?, how much sensory detail was in it? Fast paced, slow-paced? Where did they start the story – in action, in emotion?
  2. Read a few more books in another genre (to compare). How did they do their openings? If they used different tricks, could you translate that into your genre (could you put an emotional hook from a romance into a science fiction book? Sometimes it will work, sometimes it won’t – you won’t know until you experiment.
  3. Practice writing your own openings. Write three different openings using some of the techniques you liked, and see which one is better. Write it again and see if you can make it even better. What worked, and what didn’t?

The self indie published writers who are getting it right, and who do write great books, ARE the ones that work on their craft. They are constantly striving to make sure the next book is better than the previous.

And I’ve read some great one’s.

Each new book is a step towards writing THE ONE. We’ll never get there of course – none of us ever think our own writing is good enough (writers also suffer from both crushing self-doubt and illusions that we are most brilliant – very often at the same exact moment).

It’s not just indie authors, all authors continually work on getting better. Find an author you love and read their earliest books and you’ll see how much they’ve grown. You get better by writing more.

Stop the myth. Stop the stereotype. Stop the absolute blanket statements. 

We are all working to put out the best work we can, no matter what sort of author we are. And really, that’s all we can do.

Using Word’s Document Map for Outlining Your Book

I still use Microsoft Word extensively for my writing projects.

But first, I want to point out that this article is not about which writing software is better. I know some die-hard Scrivener fans, and some writers who like the simplicity of a no frills text editor. Writers tend to have strong opinions on their preferred writing tool, but I gotta say, I’m a big believer in just use what you like best. There is no ‘best’ software. I just happen to prefer Word.

If you like Word too, and want to get more out of it, then perhaps this article will be of use (or at least that was my goal for writing it).

Which brings me to main focus – using the Document Map feature in Word to quickly jump around the document from scene to scene or chapter to chapter.

I don’t write linearly – I didn’t with my non-fiction books, and I don’t with my fiction books. I like jumping around and ‘layering’ my books as the moods strikes.

For those that haven’t used this feature before, you can easily turn it on by going to the View tab, and clicking the checklist (it won’t be pink – I just highlighted it here so you can see it more easily).

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This will open up a panel on the left hand side of your screen.

If you are in a new document, it will be probably be blank, but if you are in a current working document – depending on how you’ve set up your styles – you’ll see a whole bunch of headings and other notes here.

Here’s what my current WIP’s document map looks like:

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You can see fairly clearly that I’ve listed all my chapters sequentially and I’ve also got notes of what happens in the scene, and sometimes other notes including things I still need to do.

How do you get your document map to look like this?

Heading Styles.

As I’m writing the document, I attribute my chapters and notes to different headings.

Chapter 1 (for example) will get the Heading 1 style. Scene description will get heading 2 and sometimes I’ll write extra notes using heading 3.

This is a quick guide of which styles I personally use, although you should play around with it for what works best for you:

Heading 1 attribute: ACT #, Chapter #
Heading 2 attribute: POV, Scene Description, Scene # (if more than one scene per chapter)
Heading 3 attribute: Notes, Word Counts, To Do’s

The hierarchy of the Document Map shows Heading 1′s first, Heading 2′s indented under that, and Heading 3′s indented further again.

You can also open or close anything under the Heading styles using the tiny + or – box next to the main heading. This helps if you have a lot of notes, and just want to skip quickly around to each chapter.

I like using the Document Map so that I can quickly jump around my manuscript by clicking on the left which then brings me to the correct place on the right side of the screen, so I can continue writing.

It’s much better than scrolling through your document trying to navigate to earlier or later chapters which can be a pain for large books. It’s also a good method to see at a glance what’s going on – to see the big picture.

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Heading Styles

 

You might be wondering by now, what happens to these notes once you’ve finished your manuscript. I delete them.

Using the document map like this is only useful in your drafts (and I keep a few draft versions), so you will need to delete anything that isn’t necessary in your final clean document before you upload to stores.

I do keep the notes in until the very last-minute though. They are even included when my editor goes through it. She likes that she can see a good overview of the book at a glance and says it makes her job easier, too.

Using Commenting to keep track of details.

Another small tip I do is write notes such as character hair color and so on, by using the commenting feature of Word.

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Usually I do this for minor characters only (as I prefer to have a separate scene and character document for major characters and locations).

It’s a quick way to find out what hair or eye color you’ve made for one of your characters as you can view all of  your comments at once by opening the Reviewing Pane (from the Review tab). You can either open it in place of the Document Map or at the bottom of your working document.

I hope you’ve found these tips useful for using Word to write your next book.

Happy writing,

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Amazon bought Goodreads – What does this mean for Authors?

Lions and Tigers and Bears – Oh My!

I received an email from Goodreads this morning, informing me that Amazon has just acquired them, and I knew immediately that this was going to create a huge stir in the indie author community. I was right – boards such as the newly renamed kboards.com are abuzz with speculation – what does this mean for us? Oh woe, Amazon is going to screw us, oh doom.

Most people don’t like change, and this is extremely evident in the author world (we are a skittish bunch).

But since I like to look at things from all angles I wanted to have a think about this before I commented. I’ve read a few news reports, a few blog posts, a few forum discussions. Admittedly this is all second-hand information – I’m not privy to any of the inner workings of Amazon or Goodreads, but it’s good to get some initial impressions and opinions before I formed my own.

At the moment, my thoughts are this – it’s a good thing (as Martha would say).

What does Amazon have, more than any other site? = Books

What does Goodreads have, more than any other site? = Readers

Bringing the very thing that the readers want, to their fingertips, will make it easier to purchase their favorite books (you just know that Amazon is going to integrate an easy way for readers to buy books – many people are speculating already that they may introduce a buy button or at least a link directly to the Amz book page).

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Many people currently complain that Goodreads can be clunky and hard to find your way around, if there is a tuck and tweak to the website to create a better user experience, and we all know that Amazon is well-known for tweaking their own site for maximum efficiency and (obviously) revenue, that can only help to improve the overall reader experience.

True, it does mean that the largest reader social site online right now will now promote Amz books, and not other stores. You already know that I’m against the exclusivity of Amazon’s Select program preferring wider distribution, however, a one click buy will make it much easier for readers.

So for readers, I can see this acquisition is a very good thing.

But what about authors?

Bringing books directly to readers is what Amazon has always been about from the moment they first introduced the Kindle.

Since they did so back in 2007 a new world opened up for authors. The rise of the independent author rose unlike any other time in history, and it created a way for authors to get their product directly into the hands of the consumer without having to go through a middleman.

That move was revolutionary and I for one am so thankful for the opportunities I have today because of it.

This latest move – Amazon acquiring Goodreads – was all about Amazon acquiring more customers for their business. Specifically – readers for their Kindle eBooks.

More readers for ebooks means more income for authors.

Let me repeat that – more readers buying ebooks, means more income for authors.

Yes, all the income will come from one store (although customers still do have a choice where to buy as they always have). But more readers and therefore buyers, has to be good for authors.

And don’t think that Apple (especially) and perhaps Kobo (although I think B&N doesn’t have much fight left in them) will ignore this. They’ll be looking for new ways to acquire new customers. This news will fire them up to try to entice readers over to their stores to buy books, too. Again making it better for authors.

We’ll see some interesting moves from them in the future – if they are smart.

But won’t Amazon change Goodreads?

They didn’t change Shelfari when they acquired them. They just integrated Shelfari into the Amz site with extra metadata including character names, series info, etc.

They didn’t take away Createspace’s ability to distribute elsewhere. You can still get your print books into other online stores with extended distribution.

When they started KDP (before it was called that), over time they’ve made it better and easier for authors.

Everything they’ve acquired at this point has only made better opportunities for authors. And right now, I can only see that this acquisition is better for authors too, by making it better for readers.

Let’s hope I’m right icon wink Amazon bought Goodreads – What does this mean for Authors?

Read an Ebook Week – My Results

ebookweeklogoweb Read an Ebook Week   My ResultsLast week I participated in Read an Ebook Week.

I got the email from Smashwords and figured it would be a good boost to my books that were having rather lackluster sales. If nothing else, at least I could get a few more eyeballs on them.

So, I discounted four of my books by 50%, and four by 75% through the ‘Manage Site-Wide Promotions’ on the Smashwords dashboard, and sat back feeling a smug (although really not expecting much).

For sake of comparison four books were non-fiction, four were fiction (two novels, and two ‘collections’).

The whole time I kept thinking what a good promotion it was, and how I wish Amazon would do something similar making it easy for publishers to discount books for a limited time.

And then it hit me. We can change the price at Amazon to whatever we like, whenever we like. Why don’t I just do my own ‘sale’ over there at the same time?

I changed the price of all eight of my titles that were in the promotion to the equivalent discounts on Amazon and put a note on all my descriptions:

** Discounted by 75% for a Limited Time **

In celebration of Read an Ebook Week, this title is on sale between March 3-9. After that it will return to the full list price of $3.99.

Results

Nothing happened with the non-fiction. No sales on Smashwords and sales actually went down on Amazon. It seems that people are very wary when it comes to low priced nonfiction books.  As soon as I increased the prices again on Amazon, sales returned to normal.

The collections didn’t sell on Smashwords, but did well on Amazon. I had increased sales and my ranking improved quite a bit. Probably not enough that I want to leave them at the lower price though.

The novels DID sell on Smashwords. Sold a couple of each at the 75% discount. Sales on Amazon were marginally higher, but not enough to show any real significant changes with ranking. I’ve since returned them to normal price.

Thoughts

Overall I liked the promotion and would (will) do it again. I think they have another similar type of promotion in June or July?  Obviously 75% discount is going to do much better than 50%, and full length novels/books will do better than short stories.

Next time I might try putting a few of them free to see what happens.

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Do You Have a Call-To-Action Inside Your Book?

You’ve written a great story, had it edited, formatted, got a gorg cover and your book is ready to be published.

Before you do — you might want to check your back matter.

Do you have a call to action for what you want readers to do next?

Well, you should.

If a reader has gotten to the end of your book, it means they probably loved it (of course), and may want to read more of what you’ve got.

So tell them what to do next.

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Here is what I do (ymmv):

1. Add a link to your next book (either the next in the series, or a similar book in that genre). Not a link to every book you have though, this will make customers overwhelmed. Just one or two links is enough.

It may mean, if you haven’t written the next in the series, or have no other books, that you will need to come and update your back matter when you have more written. 

AND

2. A link to your mailing list. This one is important. I neglected this for my first year as an indie, and wish I hadn’t. The key to every successful indie author I’ve stalked researched is that they have a list of people who’ve signed up to hear about their new releases. This not only helps get sales from those people when you write new books (yah for fans), but those initial sales will boost your rank and push you higher on new releases lists and other genre lists on Amazon (and other retailers).

I’ve also noted that successful authors ONLY send emails to their lists when they have a new book, or a special sale. Don’t waste your readers time with random newsletters about the writing process or your cat) . 

AND

3. A thank-you for reading your book. Your reader will appreciate it. (And it’s always good to leave on a positive note).

OPTIONAL

4. A request for reviews. I don’t do this, however it can be very effective. Asking for their time to write an honest review on Amazon (or other retailer) does help boost the amount of reviews that you will get. Keep your request polite and to the point.

That’s it!

Just adding these to your back matter will help build your sales and platform.

Happy writing & selling!

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P.S. I was asked why you wouldn’t put links to all your books and let customers choose. My answer: By all means have a list of all the books you’ve written if you want at the end. I wouldn’t put links on them all though. 

What I do is as soon as the story hits THE END, I say a quick thank you for reading, then a link to the next book (or another book) and then my mailing list link.

On the next page is a very brief ‘about the author’ section with a sentence or two about me (or my pen name) and the bibliography of all the books I’ve written under that name. My bibliography doesn’t have links — only the one or two books I’ve linked after the story does. 

I hope that makes it more clear icon smile Do You Have a Call To Action Inside Your Book?

P.S.S. January was my best sales month so far! Income is slowly creeping up – yah! Also I’ve just finished my second novel which should be published at the end of this month. Fingers crossed readers like sexy men with wings icon wink Do You Have a Call To Action Inside Your Book? What am I saying? – of course they do – duh.

P.S.S.S. I’m also doing a self-editing course this month – it’s going well so far. I’m hoping it helps me write even betterer. icon wink Do You Have a Call To Action Inside Your Book?